Monday, 12 July 2010

Jungle War story

Jungel wore [war].
By Joshua, J...
Once in the Rainforest A group
of stray soldiers attacked the
Cobra Hideout. The cobras kept
on spitting on the soldiers.
The soldiers kept on hitting
then [them] with their spears at the
cobras and throwing dynamite
on the hide-out. The cobras [...]

[This is a literacy task Joshua completed in school last term. It is a final draft, though not complete. His spelling has dramatically improved this term since he has been having extra help. He has been learning to ask for help with his spelling when he is unsure, and to spell more common words from memory and phonetic rules or cues.]


Mrs. Edwards said...

Wonderful, Joshua! I see a marked improvement in your spelling and handwriting. Your story reminds me of Ricki Ticki Tavi. Do you like that story as much as Lane does?

Alison Lacey said...

Wow what a great story. Its wonderful to see how much Joshua & Anna have improvment over the last 6 months. I hope you are all enjoying the school holidays.